Review of Windows of Emotions by Neha Maliwal


Rating: 4/5

I finished Windows of Emotion feeling warm and satisfied. It’s the kind of coming-of-age story that hugs you in small, honest ways — about family, tiny rebellions, and the messy beauty of growing up in a close-knit home. The voice is simple and very relatable, so I felt like I was reading a friend’s diary more than a formal novel.

What the book is about

The story follows Sonal, a bright, focused girl juggling exam pressure, family expectations, and first-flame crushes — while her younger sister Payal finds her own voice through rap and bold choices. Things spiral for a while when an unexpected marriage proposal, neighborhood drama, and school rumors collide with both sisters’ dreams. The narrative keeps returning to the small moments at home — breakfast, the window spot, whispered conversations — and those little scenes are what make the plot feel real. 

The characters I connected with

Sonal felt very lived-in to me — anxious about boards, proud of small wins, and desperate to hold on to her freedom. Payal surprised me the most: from being overlooked to becoming a fearless, talented rapper, she steals scenes and grows into her power. The supporting cast (parents, the judgmental aunt, the tutor who proposes) are believable and add pressure in ways that readers from similar backgrounds will recognize instantly.

What I loved

The book shines in its everyday details: the smell of sabudana wadas, the banter at the window, the little rituals of a Maharashtrian household. Those domestic touches made me feel at home in the story. I also loved how Payal’s rap and creative spark become a quiet rebellion against colorism and narrow expectations — it gave the book an emotional spine and a modern voice that lifted the whole tale.

Writing, pace and tone

The writing is straightforward and warm — not fancy, but very readable. Scenes move at a comfortable pace: the middle has family confrontations and small crises, the ending pulls things together with satisfying payoffs (Sonal’s exam success and the family settling into new plans). The conversational tone makes it easy to stay with the characters through their ups and downs.

Themes that stayed with me

The novel tackles expectations vs. dreams, sibling bonds, social bias (especially colorism), and the pressure of tradition. Rather than preaching, it shows how tiny acts — a rap onstage, a quiet stand for oneself, a sister keeping a secret — change people’s lives. Those human, everyday choices are what the book celebrates.

A very small critique (just one thing)

If I had to nitpick, a couple of scenes felt slightly long — a bit more trimming would have tightened the flow — but it didn’t take away from the emotional warmth of the story.

Final words

Overall, this book made me smile, get a little teary, and feel hopeful about these girls’ futures. It’s a gentle, authentic read about family, identity, and finding your voice — perfect when you want a realistic, heart-centered story that stays with you after the last page.

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